Post by AlphaDetermii on Aug 18, 2011 17:33:04 GMT -5
Wolf Name: Determii
Alias/Nickname: Alpha
Breed: Eurasian Wolf
Age: 16 seasons (4 years)
Apparent Age: Because Determii is lithe, and his coat is slick and smooth, he looks no older than 8 seasons (2 years)
Gender: Male
Fur color/style: Determii has a tawny ginger undercoat, with the usual black and gray markings of a Eurasian. His coat is short, and unlike Eurasian wolves, it is soft and sleek. His jowl, belly, and legs are all a soft white with a sprinkle of ginger here and there
Eyes: Orange
Marks/Scars: From a skirmish while still a pup, Determii has a small gash right above his nose
Physical Appearance: Though his coat makes him look a bit small, it also hides the muscles he has. He is short and low to the ground, which makes for good hunting. He's a very swift runner with a skilled nose and light steps. His ear is torn and he has too many battle scars to point out.
Rank: Alpha Male of the Eternal
Mate: Alpha Female (Looking)
Skills: Hunting and Fishing; also able to swim fairly well
.:Character’s Personal Information:.
Likes: sun-bathing; elk; new pups; spring; apples; pine cones
Dislikes: Cougars; Coyotes; Bears; Eagles
Flaws: Determii is not good with others. It's not that he is unfriendly, he just does not know how to begin sentences in a way that makes sense. He gets nervous while talking, so somethings come out with a light stutter
Worst Fears: Fire. Determii was born on the day that the Great Burning destroyed his old pack. He fears fire terribly.
Personality: Once a very shy, reserved he-wolf, he has learned not to hold back his thoughts, even though his speech impediment messes him up while trying to do so. He's headstrong but a very big thinker. He enjoys mindgames and puzzles. He often daydreams and talks to himself. He is more comfortable with talking things out to himself rather then to other people
History: Determii was born to Cyrus and Magdalene of the Eternal. The day he was born was the day of the Great Burning, a natural forest fire that destroyed the Eternal's former land. There were not many survivors. The pack roamed for days until they found a place that would suit them. Only 2 other pups survived the fire. When Determii was 1 season old, Tyr, another pup, attacked him and tore his ear, also giving him a scar on his nose. As Determii grew older, he and Tyr had to fight daily while apprentices. Tyr was much bigger, with stronger legs and jaws, and gave Determii the majority of the scars on his face and tail. After the Alpha gave Determii his place as Hunter, he provided the Pack with more kill than they had seen in seasons. As the weather grew harsher, he began to fancy Shelby, a Maned Wolf, and daughter of the Alphas. She was soon picked off by a bear, and Determii went into a fit of depression, not hunting, fighting, helping in any way. The Shaman came to him one night, and told him he had a destiny greater than he could imagine. You think he believed it? He didn't believe in himself, really. So gradually he went back to his duties, only to be picked as a beta one season. It was a shock to him. But alas, fire struck again. It killed his Beta Female, the Alphas, and most of the rebuilt pack. His mission is to bring the wolves back again.
Sample Writing:
Through the trees, the sun shone down on the Eurasian wolf's belly. His orange eyes were squeezed shut as he let out a content breath. The fall had been good to him, the leaves dancing around and the elk being plentiful. His belly was full, his den was clear, and there were no bears or Coyote's seen in the last two sunrises. Though the Eternal had perished a season ago, he was thriving and had not had any trouble. But he wanted his pack back. The thought of being alone forever crept back into his mind, and sighing, he rolled over and heaved himself up. His bright orange eyes opened slowly. "I am Alpha." He barked to himself, and shook his head.Yea, Alpha of WHAT
Alias/Nickname: Alpha
Breed: Eurasian Wolf
Age: 16 seasons (4 years)
Apparent Age: Because Determii is lithe, and his coat is slick and smooth, he looks no older than 8 seasons (2 years)
Gender: Male
Fur color/style: Determii has a tawny ginger undercoat, with the usual black and gray markings of a Eurasian. His coat is short, and unlike Eurasian wolves, it is soft and sleek. His jowl, belly, and legs are all a soft white with a sprinkle of ginger here and there
Eyes: Orange
Marks/Scars: From a skirmish while still a pup, Determii has a small gash right above his nose
Physical Appearance: Though his coat makes him look a bit small, it also hides the muscles he has. He is short and low to the ground, which makes for good hunting. He's a very swift runner with a skilled nose and light steps. His ear is torn and he has too many battle scars to point out.
Rank: Alpha Male of the Eternal
Mate: Alpha Female (Looking)
Skills: Hunting and Fishing; also able to swim fairly well
.:Character’s Personal Information:.
Likes: sun-bathing; elk; new pups; spring; apples; pine cones
Dislikes: Cougars; Coyotes; Bears; Eagles
Flaws: Determii is not good with others. It's not that he is unfriendly, he just does not know how to begin sentences in a way that makes sense. He gets nervous while talking, so somethings come out with a light stutter
Worst Fears: Fire. Determii was born on the day that the Great Burning destroyed his old pack. He fears fire terribly.
Personality: Once a very shy, reserved he-wolf, he has learned not to hold back his thoughts, even though his speech impediment messes him up while trying to do so. He's headstrong but a very big thinker. He enjoys mindgames and puzzles. He often daydreams and talks to himself. He is more comfortable with talking things out to himself rather then to other people
History: Determii was born to Cyrus and Magdalene of the Eternal. The day he was born was the day of the Great Burning, a natural forest fire that destroyed the Eternal's former land. There were not many survivors. The pack roamed for days until they found a place that would suit them. Only 2 other pups survived the fire. When Determii was 1 season old, Tyr, another pup, attacked him and tore his ear, also giving him a scar on his nose. As Determii grew older, he and Tyr had to fight daily while apprentices. Tyr was much bigger, with stronger legs and jaws, and gave Determii the majority of the scars on his face and tail. After the Alpha gave Determii his place as Hunter, he provided the Pack with more kill than they had seen in seasons. As the weather grew harsher, he began to fancy Shelby, a Maned Wolf, and daughter of the Alphas. She was soon picked off by a bear, and Determii went into a fit of depression, not hunting, fighting, helping in any way. The Shaman came to him one night, and told him he had a destiny greater than he could imagine. You think he believed it? He didn't believe in himself, really. So gradually he went back to his duties, only to be picked as a beta one season. It was a shock to him. But alas, fire struck again. It killed his Beta Female, the Alphas, and most of the rebuilt pack. His mission is to bring the wolves back again.
Sample Writing:
Through the trees, the sun shone down on the Eurasian wolf's belly. His orange eyes were squeezed shut as he let out a content breath. The fall had been good to him, the leaves dancing around and the elk being plentiful. His belly was full, his den was clear, and there were no bears or Coyote's seen in the last two sunrises. Though the Eternal had perished a season ago, he was thriving and had not had any trouble. But he wanted his pack back. The thought of being alone forever crept back into his mind, and sighing, he rolled over and heaved himself up. His bright orange eyes opened slowly. "I am Alpha." He barked to himself, and shook his head.Yea, Alpha of WHAT
